Editing Phishing documents

I got a phishing document and am editing it to see if they notice. This is the original document:

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SWIFT TRANSFER DEPARTMENT

AFRICAN DEVELOPMENT BANK GROUP

Ouagadougou, 01 BP 1319 01,

Burkina Faso.

Email: [email protected]

Dear Sir,

APPLICATION FOR THE RELEASE OF FUND AS BENEFICIARY

I humbly apply to this bank today for the released of fund deposited by my late partner your deceased

customer, MRS. MARRY PEDRO who died in a car accident in the year 2008.

I hereby apply putting claim over her balance with your bank valued at (USD$22, 000,000) (Million

United States Dollars).

Her account number 002118-082-4001.

I am a business partner to the deceased depositor as the fund deposited in your bank was budgeted for

a construction project by me and my late partner. However, the death of MRS. MARRY PEDRO has

prolonged the project from taken place till now. I would be grateful if my application will be given the

urgent attention it deserves since the project is now set to take place, as I wish that the balance would

be released and re-transfer to my bank account as the rightful beneficiary of the said amount

respectively:

My bank account details below:

Bank Name:

Address:

Acc. Number:

Swift Code:

Beneficiary:

Fax:

I anticipate an urgent compliance to this application, and well oblige you all necessary co-operation to

this effect.

Thanks for your sincere co-operation

Full Name

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Date:
From:
Date of Birth:
Address:

Occupation:
Tel:
Email:

TO:

SWIFT TRANSFER DEPARTMENT
AFRICAN DEVELOPMENT BANK GROUP
Ouagadougou, 01 BP 1319 01,
Burkina Faso.
Email: [email protected]

Dear Sir,

APPLICATION FOR THE RELEASE OF FUND AS BENEFICIARY

I humbly apply to this bank today for the released of fund deposited by my late partner your debuting customer, MR. RICK ASTLEY who released Never Gonna Give You Up in the year 1987.

I hereby apply putting claim over her balance with your bank valued at (USD$22, 000,000) (Million United States Dollars).
Her account number 002118-082-4001.

I am a business partner to the Debuting depositor as the fund deposited in your bank was budgeted for a construction project by me and my late partner. However, the debut of MR. RICK ASTLEY has prolonged the project from taken place till now. I would be grateful if my application will be given the urgent attention it deserves since the project is now set to take place, as I wish that the balance would be released and re-transfer to my bank account as the rightful beneficiary of the said amount respectively:

My bank account details below:

Bank Name:
Address:

Acc. Number:

Swift Code:

Beneficiary:
Fax:

I anticipate an urgent compliance to this application, and well oblige you all necessary co-operation to this effect.

Thanks for your sincere co-operation

Full Name

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